I liked the story,
I would have given you like a 3, but I'm going easy on you because this is your first submission. Just work on your art, animation, and voice acting - to be honest, they really weren't good. The story was great, though. Keep it up!
thanks for the review. check my other work
I saw this a long time ago on a different site. It is AMAZING!
You are now in jail for twelve years. Twelve? Twelve. TWELVE!? Yes, that is an odd number, isn't it? I LIKE BEANS. <<Favorite part.
I like when he stepped on the sand castle and the kid cried. What would you do for a dollar? This guy would jump off a plane, apparently...
Just a test
I would have given this a much lower score, but it's just a test. The only thing wrong is the collision detection; on those circle platforms, you fall off before the end because your feet stop touching the circle, even though you're still actually on the platform. Other than that, and no enemies or fighting moves, it's good.
I tried so hard to find something wrong with the game. I failed. Great job, keep it up!
I'm glad that you failed, thanks!
I actually sort of liked it. I dunno whether there was music or sounds, which if there is, that's good. There's just something missing... you could make the background scroll. It does get repetitive after a while, but good game overall.
I'm... speechless... it was strange. Strange, but good.
Name fits it
The name really fits
0:05 - Uh oh, something's coming...
0:30 - EAAAH! It's closer!
1:30 - AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
I like it.
Not bad. Not bad at all! Great job, keep up the good work!
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